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Re: The Desert Needs The Rain
Hey there! This song really hit the spot for me, so thanks! I think you portrayed those feelings well. Nothing else to say but gold star, my friend. Uber gold ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 13
Hey again! Lookin good! You've got a great collection of cliches in this one. They made me laugh! I especially enjoyed the vampire, the dwarf from Snow White, and Napoleon. ...
Mar 2, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 12
Hey there! I really liked this chapter! Especially the beginning, which had some great imagery there. Question: Is giganto a real word? I enjoyed the use of it, just curious. ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Alvalor: chapter four
Dream, thanks for the visit! You've made some excellent comments, which I'm going to take back to the drawing board with me. Thank you! 200397, :D I don't think I've ...
Feb 17, 2009 -
Re: Autumnal Night
Hey there! I really liked this! You have some great diction, and the imagery works well. The only problem i have is the flow, really. The word "tarnish" and the ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Alvalor: chapter four
I know it's been a while, so I'll review what's happened so far. Will got sucked into a book he was reading, called The Septribes . Now he's made friends ...
Feb 16, 2009 -
Re: Snow is...
This is an activity we did one time in Creative Writing. All you have to do, really, is finish the sentence: Snow is... Go ahead and be creative. Let's stretch ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: Gone
It was just a moment; just a glimpse into a life separated from my own. Before eyes were strangers, and frogs lost the will to jump from the boiling water. ...
Feb 3, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 10
Hello again! Well, it may not have be action-packed, but I sure didn't find it dull! I thought it was cute, and I liked the bit about Clover asking Ivory ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 27
Hey, KJ! And congrats! I enjoyed this one too, but I've come to expect that. This one is a bit slower than the rest, but I liked it because it ...
Jan 25, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 9
Yay, Clover! He gets a smiley face sticker for learning how to dance! I've gotta admit, I chuckled through the whole dancing thing. It made me smile. :D You're fitting ...
Jan 19, 2009 -
Re: Because - Chap. 25
I don't know how you do it! You had me at the edge of my seat through the whole chapter! You made it intense, yet you didn't fail to miss ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Tell Us The Last Thing You Said Out Loud
"There's nothing wrong with the createspace guy! He's posing!" :roll: ...brothers....
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: The Boy
Hey again! I decided to check out your profile. :D EJ, the leader of gang zX9, had the criminal record of a murderous Gadianton. I enjoyed this bit. Can I ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: You Created It All
Hey there! This poem reminds me of a mix between How Great Thou Art and Heavenly Father Loves Me (aka Whenever I hear the song of a bird) Raimunda pretty ...
Jan 4, 2009
